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11-8-04
Nov 28, 2004 22:28:18 GMT -5
Post by .B.e.c.c.a.<3 on Nov 28, 2004 22:28:18 GMT -5
time to draw a picture with my shiny carving knife i'll draw it on my heart and color it with life i push the knife into my skin stabbing through my chest cutting out my beating heart i start to lose my breath my eyes are getting heavy i'll have to work fast plunging the knife into this bloody mess i quickly carve out your name almost done now i smile at what i've done sewing you back inside i start to breath again
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11-8-04
Dec 16, 2004 14:34:25 GMT -5
Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Dec 16, 2004 14:34:25 GMT -5
I like this poem its well written and brutally to the point..
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11-8-04
Dec 16, 2004 16:03:28 GMT -5
Post by BlackWidow on Dec 16, 2004 16:03:28 GMT -5
OUCH!! Raw and very personal..with a great flow Thanks for sharing BW
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