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Post by BlackWidow on Nov 13, 2004 19:19:59 GMT -5
~For the romantics ~
Sprawled beneath the warming touch,of the afternoons embrace I lie open to the pleasures of golden sunlight on my face With closed eyes and sated sighs,I seduce my lovers thoughts As close beside,he smiles inside,for all our love has brought
Temptation licked at velvet flesh,desire floated on our lips We drank in all the passions wine,savouring with each kiss Hands so knowing roamed the skin,fingers played and traced Every breath,each lingering sigh,undressed and found its place
Poetry in motion,fused together,within the arms of higher love Blending sensual with erotic,we had all we'd both dreamed of Taking in the whispers as the afternoon had found its muse Painting us upon the wall,silhouettes of sun kissed hues
Recalling this within my smile,I turned onto my side Laced his thoughts with all my heart,with tender touch I did confide That while the afternoon has faded and undressed to change for night Let us paint the walls with stars,then again with morning light
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Nov 18, 2004 15:07:41 GMT -5
This is another great poem by you my favorite part is:
'Sprawled beneath the warming touch,of the afternoons embrace I lie open to the pleasures of golden sunlight on my face'
I dont know why but it is..
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Post by BlackWidow on Nov 19, 2004 6:08:48 GMT -5
Thanks BM..yeah maybe its the imagery.I always try to paint with words,so to speak.I like to create the images and play with the canvas.. I dunno..maybe its for a diff reason but whatever it is..I think thats my fave too BW
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Nov 19, 2004 9:54:27 GMT -5
I wish I could paint the things I think like you can. Maybe one day I can and it will be awesome like your work.
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Post by BlackWidow on Nov 24, 2004 23:33:54 GMT -5
sheesh..Im not much good with comps..ty Ive said it before..we all paint to our own song cheers BW
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Nov 25, 2004 23:13:53 GMT -5
I want to be able to paint my thoughts, dreams and feelings like you one day without a doubt but I think that your work shows that you have lived more than I have and had more of a complete life. so I have many years to go yet.
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Post by BlackWidow on Nov 28, 2004 17:20:56 GMT -5
lol..theres a song in there somewhere you know..how cool.See? it comes from absolutely nowhere and for the strangest reasons at the most unusual times
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Dec 16, 2004 13:59:14 GMT -5
lol..theres a song in there somewhere you know..how cool.See? it comes from absolutely nowhere and for the strangest reasons at the most unusual times This would make for a great great song without a doubt!
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