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Post by BlackWidow on Nov 3, 2004 9:25:51 GMT -5
Her body,a canvas not worthy Her mind,a sea of thoughts Her heart,an open welcome With all the pain it's brought Hands offered for comfort Her arms,forever reach out In vain they try and embrace To relieve the hurt and doubt Her eyes,too closed to reality A mouth that craves to taste Love that breathes inside of her Romantic dreams,a waste Kisses linger on quivering lips Sighs choke and strangle her words Dying for the need to break free From a soul so deeply stirred
Escaping into darkness Through the night,she sees A place to shed her pain Her world of make believe Hungry for the tasting The claret from the flesh Of a man who lives his life One heartache to the next Naked are his struggles She sees through,within Tempting the open window Her breeze will cover him She feels his hurt contain her It swirls and holds its ground Baring his soul,taking control Understanding was now found
Velvet kisses of their breath Trail each others skin Dancing in the turbulence Of every unknown sin Perfect in its rapture Symphonic in its bliss Two become as one this night With every blood sucked kiss A mixture of pure potency Joined together in this heat Two hearts beat in fusion In blood,their souls now meet Found upon the night air Love will have its way For two who live in darkness And exist by light of day
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Post by Breakdown on Nov 6, 2004 12:27:25 GMT -5
Two become as one this night With every blood sucked kiss A mixture of pure potency Joined together in this heat Two hearts beat in fusion In blood,their souls now meet
i love that part.... but yet i must say the whole thing is great ^_^
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Post by BlackWidow on Nov 7, 2004 3:36:49 GMT -5
Thanks..yeah I had fun writing this.Pictured myself flying through the night and landing in someones life..(im a fruit lol)
BW
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Nov 10, 2004 12:21:20 GMT -5
This is my favorite part as well. I liked this poem I can see you writing this and thats what makes a good poem!
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