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Post by BlackWidow on Nov 2, 2004 22:41:09 GMT -5
I guess it's not for me I know it sees me standing,waiting Like a commuter,I'm following the trend
At this bus stop for fools and dreamers I stand in line and wait my turn Watching each and every bus pretend
Slowing down to make me think It will stop and take me home I fall for it,each and every time
With the change of a broken heart My only fare into the future It's never enough to take the ride
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Post by Breakdown on Nov 6, 2004 12:29:05 GMT -5
lol i like that one.... good job once again ^_^
sorry im bad at saying stuff about poetry.... i just say good job if i like it... and you suck if its bad(lol just kidding)
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Post by BlackWidow on Nov 7, 2004 3:34:44 GMT -5
Thanks Breakdown... It matters not the comment..it matters most the time taken to read and hopefully enjoy Thank you for taking the time.. and hey! Its fine to say it sux lol BW
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Nov 10, 2004 12:16:59 GMT -5
I like this poem. I feel the same way in this game called love. I think I am crazy but I have a bus that I miss alot if you know what I mean.
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