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Post by BlackWidow on Nov 2, 2004 8:27:45 GMT -5
It seems your days go on,without a single thought No looking back,or passing times of wonders I look into myself,see what loving you has brought Crimson stains within,as hurt casts me under
I have to question reality,though it is my chosen host Did you ever really find existence in my space Or could it be insanity,and you were nothing but a ghost Who came and played a selfish game of tag and race
Whenever the wind dances,whips its cries about the home I listen for the whispers,I thought I always knew But there is nothing but myself,a shattered piece alone Waiting out the storm,just waiting to hear from you
Is this the night,I fall from grace,take leave of my heart Bury the trust I had in you,softly say goodbye You are hidden away,we are moon and stars apart Forgotten we are,kept in the dark,me myself and I
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Nov 2, 2004 12:07:56 GMT -5
Another great piece. I read this and was thinking about what I want to say to my past ghosts you know. I just want to tell them that I will bury them within me
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Post by BlackWidow on Nov 2, 2004 19:02:57 GMT -5
Better still..chew them up,spit them out and tell them to walk lol
Thanks BM
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Post by Breakdown on Nov 6, 2004 12:26:07 GMT -5
wow that is alot better than anything i can write GOOD JOB!`
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Post by BlackWidow on Nov 7, 2004 3:38:53 GMT -5
There is no better or worse to me..we each have our own ways and methods.Expression is a freedom and should be respected. But thank you...encouragement is a wonderful thing BW
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Nov 10, 2004 12:23:50 GMT -5
There is no better or worse to me..we each have our own ways and methods.Expression is a freedom and should be respected. But thank you...encouragement is a wonderful thing BW I have to agree with this. No poem is bad because everyone has their own ways of expressing themselves..
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