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Post by BlackWidow on Oct 23, 2004 20:07:15 GMT -5
With the finesse of a velvet kiss,your words fell to my eyes Painting beautiful pictures,fields of yellow and azure skies
As my body lay beneath your spell,my mind held in your trance I could feel your abstract breeze,as through my hair it danced
Temptations licked at feelings,coursing through my every fibre And I crawled up to your fluted tongue,I needed to be higher
So close to your soft whispers,nearer to your kiss of colours Lost within your contoured words,I'm ever me, and no other
Moonlit eyes now drink of stars,from the canvas of your soul Replenished in the wonders,as they take a midnight stroll
Across your skin and through your mind,I wander with a smile As there you love me patiently,painting all the while
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Oct 23, 2004 22:04:21 GMT -5
Another great masterpiece, funny I used a pun, lol anyways I think this poem has so much in it. The telling of a story around a simple artistic feel is a good way to get what you want to say out there. I think this is another good work.
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Post by BlackWidow on Oct 24, 2004 5:39:17 GMT -5
Thanks.I have always liked this one.It felt good as I was writing it.I had thoughts on how a womans flesh and feel could be her lovers muse(vice versa as well) and he the painter,with his whispers and touch,his tongue..I love the sensual.
I believe you have the talent to craft a really sensual piece..*hint hint* Challenge?? lol
Cheers
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Nov 1, 2004 23:30:09 GMT -5
Thanks.I have always liked this one.It felt good as I was writing it.I had thoughts on how a womans flesh and feel could be her lovers muse(vice versa as well) and he the painter,with his whispers and touch,his tongue..I love the sensual. I believe you have the talent to craft a really sensual piece..*hint hint* Challenge?? lol Cheers Well Ill have to try a sensual piece and when I return in a few days I shall debut it.
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