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Post by BlackWidow on Oct 23, 2004 20:06:01 GMT -5
Im not sure if you're listening Yet still my heart it calls Though only the stars are watching Maybe you heard the fall All about my rain drenched body Spill the tears, from deep within So warm and yet they burn my face My heart has known your sin
Only moonlight sees me lying here There's no tender songs embrace All I have,is all I feel And this pain I can't erase In waiting,I was faithful In loving you,I was free So why did you take away my smiles And leave me in misery
Crippled by the agony All I can do is shed my tears I'm so ashamed and deeply mamed For ever relaxing all my fears I believed in all your whispers Your touch opened up my soul Yet now I stand,once more cheated On the edge of a lonely hole
Deep into its darkness I peer between my tears Watching as they fall and leave Till no more drops appear For if this be my fate To be ever lost in pain Then I will cry all by myself With no help from love again
Hear me as I die a little Taste the torment in my heart Watch as the love I thought was mine Tear my soul apart No,do not say a word This is mine and mine alone Just watch me from your happiness A place I've never known
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Oct 23, 2004 22:01:04 GMT -5
I want to say this before anyone else does this is one of the best poems I have ever read. Really it has so much emotion and so much behind it it kept me in and wanting more. The way you write your poems is poetry in itself and this poem makes me want to hug you and tell you everything will be alright. I know the feeling of watching from someone elses happiness as I never got to enjoy it. The View is terrible but I think it made me who I am. This poems is dramatic in everyway and I love it.
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Post by BlackWidow on Oct 24, 2004 5:45:58 GMT -5
I wouldnt trade my scars for anything..Because of these stains,I have grown.You said it well with
and besides,i think pain can create some damn good writes lol
hugs
P.S your words humble me..ty
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Nov 1, 2004 23:32:49 GMT -5
I wouldnt trade my scars for anything..Because of these stains,I have grown.You said it well with and besides,i think pain can create some damn good writes lol hugs P.S your words humble me..ty I have no troubles with tellin gyou exactly how I feel about your poetry. I believe you are one of the best ever to grace this site and in the past we have had some wonderful poets.
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Post by BlackWidow on Nov 2, 2004 8:23:34 GMT -5
wow..thanks so much.Thats HUGE! Here I was thinking the rain outside was calming..your words gave a smile..ty
Widow
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Nov 2, 2004 12:05:00 GMT -5
Well I am glad the rain can calm thee because It calms me beyond belief. Well I hope to read more of your work because they are all worth reading again and again.
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