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Post by Anton on Oct 18, 2004 2:02:22 GMT -5
Once again this is an old poem by me. As you can tell around this time period I was feeling somewhat lonely. I guess you could say.
Confused
Confused and abused, My soul sunken In the mystic waters of my mind Left behind only to find that no one is there To let me share these feelings
My mind crashing as fear appears Where’s the ship to take away this carnage If you search for it You won’t want to find it Everything in my mind Crazy and hard to find
Are you really that blind Is it that hard to find Behind my eyes Through my brain Down my throat Into my heart
Don’t set yourself apart Confused and abused I start to walk in my mind But everything is so hard to find Damn these fears and uncontrolled thoughts
Never to share With those who use and abuse With those that are selfish and unpleased Never to share my confused fears and thoughts
I’m just so confused.
Hope you enjoyed it.
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Oct 18, 2004 2:06:43 GMT -5
Yeah I must say you were confused. LOL good poem though Tony.
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Post by Anton on Oct 18, 2004 2:09:14 GMT -5
Lol, thanks Lance. ;D Yes, I was very uh.. confused. For some reason my writing ability has been fading. I try to write and I never finish anything.
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Oct 18, 2004 2:12:01 GMT -5
LOl sometimes my poetry prowless fades but I always get it back. Sometimes its gone for months sometime I wake up in the middle of th enigth with a poem in my head. It varies.
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Post by Anton on Oct 18, 2004 2:17:28 GMT -5
LOl sometimes my poetry prowless fades but I always get it back. Sometimes its gone for months sometime I wake up in the middle of th enigth with a poem in my head. It varies. Yea, that's how it is for me. But everytime it comes back I'm always doing something to where I can't write it down or type it on here.
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