"To This Line" - Old Poem

[Anton]

I wrote this a while back. I was feeling, well if you read you will find out how I was feeling.

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“To This Line”

Simplistic and distasteful my body aches for the beat of another heart next to mine. For the love that no one has given me. Though, at glance you would not lend your feelings over to me; nor would you want to feel my affectionate love for you. Look into my eyes and see my soul sunken, like a ship in the bottom of the ocean. Try to renovate my hollow soul with your tender feelings.

As you walk away, my soul sinks deeper into the bottomless pit of my body. Never again will I try to mend it; never again will you bend it more with your reprehensible actions. Never again will I stare into your eyes and wait for that astonishing day that you will say something to me. Poetic my soul may be, but it is also shattered from your insufferable acknowledgement of me. To this line, you won’t be as blind as you were before. You will see how you made me feel. Never again will I feel for you or will I want you to feel for me. There will be another, more passionate about my feelings than you. She will be the one to patch my soul up, piece by piece.

To this line, you will be nevermore in my life.

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Hope you enjoyed it.

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

wow that is really good Tony. I didnt expect that to be honest. That was a great way of using paragraphs for your poem and also the story style of poetry is coming along these days. This is a great poem shows that you have had someone tear you up and you wanted to tell them ho wyou feel because of it. I can relate to this

[Anton]

Bleeding said:

wow that is really good Tony. I didnt expect that to be honest. That was a great way of using paragraphs for your poem and also the story style of poetry is coming along these days. This is a great poem shows that you have had someone tear you up and you wanted to tell them how you feel because of it. I can relate to this

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I'll start reading poems that you wrote in a little while. I'm going to go up front for a few minutes and et me something to snack on, lol.

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

Well I am glad you will read some of my poems. I like people leaving me comments about them.

[BlackWidow]

*gobsmacked* You held me with the first line..carried me through the pain and torment,rested me gently on your strength for resolve.

BRAVO!! This will stay with me.

My words are never said lightly...believe that!

Widow

[Anton]

BlackWidow said:

*gobsmacked* You held me with the first line..carried me through the pain and torment,rested me gently on your strength for resolve.

BRAVO!! This will stay with me.

My words are never said lightly...believe that!

Widow

Wow! Thanks for your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;D

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

Doesn't those comments by Sharon make you want to write more poems? lol