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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Aug 1, 2003 9:14:32 GMT -5
This is where you tell me what you think about my poems and songs. Be nice, mean or whatever but be constructive when you reply here. I want to know the honest truth.
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Post by Låuŗєn on Aug 1, 2003 18:22:39 GMT -5
I love them all! They have alot of meaning and very good lyrics. Good job.
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Aug 1, 2003 18:35:39 GMT -5
Thanks, More will be coming soon also you can go to my website and see them at 1980.iwarp.com/poems.htm I think thats it! |
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Post by Breakdown on Aug 23, 2003 14:18:54 GMT -5
Yo, Lance, those songs are awesome, i wish i could write songs as good as you...
Oh yeah, the poems, were good too, well i really dont know why, i just never understand poems...like i failed a peom class in school, i did really bad...but they were really good, they would be better if i got the point out of them, but that isnt your fault, im just dumb
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Aug 23, 2003 14:51:39 GMT -5
The songs would be much better if I had riffs or something or I knew how to write music. I am dumb when it comes to that.
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Post by Breakdown on Aug 23, 2003 15:08:31 GMT -5
well, we would make a good group, cause you're really good at writing songs, and im kinda good at writing riffs and music...
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Aug 23, 2003 15:13:34 GMT -5
Well take one of the songs and write music to it. Make it sound the way you want and add things if needed or ask me. We can do that couldnt we?
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Post by Breakdown on Aug 23, 2003 15:15:51 GMT -5
yeah, sure we can, i really like that push song, i think im gonna make music for that...
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Aug 23, 2003 15:20:48 GMT -5
I really like Push also. That would be an awesome song. Ill come up with logos for the followign band names I thought of:
RaReFORM, Mudpeople, Wasteland Turmoil, and things..Hahah those are cool names.
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Post by Breakdown on Aug 23, 2003 15:24:50 GMT -5
I really like Push also. That would be an awesome song. Ill come up with logos for the followign band names I thought of: RaReFORM, Mudpeople, Wasteland Turmoil, and things..Hahah those are cool names. COOL, go for it yeah those are cool names... i should be done with the music in like a week, maybe longer cause i have to start school on Wednesday... |
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Aug 23, 2003 15:45:10 GMT -5
Well I like the band name Dirt. First album is Mudpeople. The album cover will have three people rising from the mud in a swamp..That would be cool. Anyways if you can figure out a chorus for the Push V1 or V2 song that would be cool.
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Post by Breakdown on Aug 23, 2003 15:47:32 GMT -5
yeah, i was thinking about puting a chorus in the song, but i wasnt sure if that was what you wanted...well ill think of one, and ill post it when im done...
and your ideas sound really cool, i cant wait to see everything when it is done...
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Aug 23, 2003 16:08:06 GMT -5
I already have logos done for Dirt the band name. I am going to do the mudpeople album later today or tonight.
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Post by Daemon Rose on Sept 4, 2003 20:19:46 GMT -5
Your very good at what you do. All your poemsa re awesome and your songs all they need is music and maybe a chorus and it is set from there.
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