My pityful attempt

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My pityful attempt Oct 23, 2003 15:41:09 GMT -5

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Post by Dale The Great! on Oct 23, 2003 15:41:09 GMT -5

Heres somet i did i warn u i suck, i got help on this one from someone

Sing me a song, you're a singer
Do me a wrong, you're a bringer of evil
The Devil is never a maker
The less that you give, you're a taker
So it's on and on and on
...it's Heaven and Hell, oh well

The lover of life's not a sinner
The ending is just a beginner
The closer you get to the meaning
The sooner you'll know that you're dreaming
So it's on and on and on
Oh it's on and on and on
It goes on and on and on, Heaven and Hell
I can tell, fool, fool!

Well, if it seems to be real, it's illusion
For every moment of truth, there's confusion in life
Love can be seen as the answer
But nobody bleeds for the dancer
And it's on and on, on and on and on....

They say that life's a carousel
Spinning fast, you've got to ride it well
The world is full of Kings and Queens
Who blind your eyes then steal your dreams
...it's Heaven and Hell, oh well

And they'll tell you black is really white
The moon is just the sun at night
And when you walk in golden halls
You get to keep the gold that falls
It's Heaven and Hell

No no fool, fool!
You got to bleed for the dancer!
Fool, fool, look for the answer!
Fool, fool, fool!

Dale The Great! Super Moderator Zero The Hero! Posts: 3,105	My pityful attempt Oct 23, 2003 15:48:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dale The Great! on Oct 23, 2003 15:48:16 GMT -5 heres my rhyme thing ;D: oooooommmm beefy <---(2) ooooombeefy<-----(1) ooombeefy<-----(2) beefy<------(1) ooooom<-----(1) the numbers signal how long u say each bit it actually sounds good if u say it right ;D

Dale The Great! Super Moderator Zero The Hero! Posts: 3,105	My pityful attempt Oct 27, 2003 4:08:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dale The Great! on Oct 27, 2003 4:08:16 GMT -5 take it no-one likes it

Mr. Hendrickson™ Administrator TheCause is Back! "The Best Columnist has Returned!" Posts: 8,976	My pityful attempt Oct 27, 2003 15:59:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Oct 27, 2003 15:59:27 GMT -5 LOL its good...
	Mr. Hendrickson Presents the ... [glow=red,2,300]Peep-ulation[/glow] Where you will become a somebody! 'When life gives you lemons, give it the MIDDLE FINGER!'

Sheik Positive Poster Posts: 158	My pityful attempt Oct 27, 2003 16:08:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sheik on Oct 27, 2003 16:08:16 GMT -5 lol yea one post after another lol.....keep it up im sure you'll come up wit more
	"The blue sky is infinitely high, crystal clear...that's what the world should be...a world of infinite possibilities, laid before us, crystal clear" "I am a wanderer, it's time for me to wander again"

Dale The Great! Super Moderator Zero The Hero! Posts: 3,105	My pityful attempt Oct 27, 2003 16:09:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dale The Great! on Oct 27, 2003 16:09:02 GMT -5 Fungai™ said: its good... \ wow thanks

Sheik Positive Poster Posts: 158	My pityful attempt Oct 27, 2003 16:10:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sheik on Oct 27, 2003 16:10:40 GMT -5 ........Strange you saound as if you dont really like your own work?
	"The blue sky is infinitely high, crystal clear...that's what the world should be...a world of infinite possibilities, laid before us, crystal clear" "I am a wanderer, it's time for me to wander again"

Dale The Great! Super Moderator Zero The Hero! Posts: 3,105	My pityful attempt Oct 27, 2003 16:19:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dale The Great! on Oct 27, 2003 16:19:17 GMT -5 Little said: ........Strange you saound as if you dont really like your own work? i like, just dint think others would

Sheik Positive Poster Posts: 158	My pityful attempt Oct 28, 2003 11:00:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sheik on Oct 28, 2003 11:00:15 GMT -5 Well you were wrong about that.....
	"The blue sky is infinitely high, crystal clear...that's what the world should be...a world of infinite possibilities, laid before us, crystal clear" "I am a wanderer, it's time for me to wander again"

Dale The Great! Super Moderator Zero The Hero! Posts: 3,105	My pityful attempt Oct 28, 2003 11:07:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dale The Great! on Oct 28, 2003 11:07:01 GMT -5 Little said: Well you were wrong about that..... indeed i was

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