Suicide No More.

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

Darkness Falls on the eyes of the awakened
Erasing all the light behind the dreams
Whispering violence and dispair
Into the ears of the one who fears

Trembling and shaking from the darkness that has consumed
The once mellow one becomes violent and indestructive
Pouncing on the pure of heart
Destroying their wall that blocked the dark
It consumes them without hesitation
Taking over another to continue on its quest

As they kill themselves to escape the darkness
The darkness soldiers on to another
To another
To another
To another
and to another untils its quest is finished

The blood spills onto the floor as the last one left gives in
Gives into her pain, suffering and selfishness
She drops to the floor looking into the darkness upon her floor
Gasping one more time as her life of her and her son dances befor eher eyes
One last breathe and no more
The darkness has consumed the final soul, now the quest is complete....

Suicide is not the answer
Suicide is an easy way out of something that can be solved
But many think of it as the only means to a problem
Think twice before letting the darkness consume you
Think about your family and friends before doing yourself in
Remember all problems can be solved if your willing...

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

Ok doesn't anyone want to comment in anyway to this poem or anything on this board anymore?

[Breakdown]

well im really not into poems, i can never really understand them, but that poem really touched me, i understand everything, since i already have been thinking of suiced alot lately, i dont know why, im just crazy like that...but yeah it is a really nice poem, good job, and ill try to read and understand the other poems, and tell everyone how i feel about them, ill do my best...

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

Thanks that was simply a message to those whoa re thinking or have tried suicide like myself. I have tried it a few times thought about it alot as of late. I dont know as I sit back and realize all the lives that I will change by doing this one selfish act I drop what I am doing and go for a car ride. I dont need that thought of the lives I ruin on my soul forever so I dont do it. This poem symbolizes alot of hate and rage inside me for people taking the easy way out life. I am sorry to those who have lost people because of suicide but read the poem and understand the last phrases it is a problem that can be solved. All problems can be solved dont forget the good times...

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

BUMPIN IT UP!

[Pixie]

That is a good poem. Your right suicide isn't the answer to anything it is selfish and only causes heartache for your loved ones.

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

hanks for the comments. This poem helped me not do this..This poem is my cry out for hel pbasically.