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Post by Robert on Aug 7, 2003 23:41:29 GMT -5
My Love 4 U
I lay thoughtless on my bed But you I dream of, instead Of nothing that makes my mind thread And ruins my head
You’re my baby girl Talking to you makes me swirl. You’re my one and only Your glimmering eye makes me happy!
Your touch brightens my day My love for you is too hard to put into words to say. I show my gratitude for you By making sure that the good times we go through
All I want is to love you for life Not to go through more pain like a knife To live my life in happiness And to see you soo happy, that your speechless
I would give it all away To make you very happy But what can I say I do my best to do that everyday
I stay on the track to be alive When really my love for you I keep alive When I’m sad and down You turn that frown upside down
You make me feel special The more I talk to you, the less I think of this life of pure hell I’d do whatever it takes to make you see How much you mean to me
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Post by Breakdown on Aug 13, 2003 13:24:04 GMT -5
That's really good, good job, you wrote that for your girlfriend, right?
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Post by Robert on Aug 15, 2003 11:58:49 GMT -5
yeah, it was fun to write, but the thing is it didnt take long!
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Aug 21, 2003 12:43:31 GMT -5
I like this as well. Very well written.
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Post by Forsaken on Sept 29, 2003 14:52:01 GMT -5
That's really good, good job, you wrote that for your girlfriend, right? what Girlfriend....he doesnt have one im confused
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Post by Dale The Great! on Oct 23, 2003 15:37:15 GMT -5
wow thats great! how do u makem so good?
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Post by Robert on Dec 3, 2003 22:42:06 GMT -5
its called creativity.... and plus when you love, you love man, it comes from the heart.
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Dec 4, 2003 18:03:18 GMT -5
Yes I agree... 'When you love, you love!" good quote!
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Post by Breakdown on Dec 5, 2003 13:58:16 GMT -5
Yes I agree... 'When you love, you love!" good quote! that is the dumbest qoute i ever heard...lol it doesnt make sense
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Post by Robert on Dec 6, 2003 17:07:10 GMT -5
your not too brilliant then Andy!
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