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Post by Breakdown on Aug 30, 2003 9:06:58 GMT -5
Here i will post all the songs i writen, and are writing, u can post in here and tell me what you think of them...
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Post by Breakdown on Aug 30, 2003 9:07:51 GMT -5
Burried
Verse 1
Sitting at my desk,
Waiting for my test,
What else should I say,
The teacher is really gay,
What else should I write,
I?ll get in a fight,
Walking to my class,
He asked me for my pass,
I started to fall,
Got pushed into the wall,
Turned around and said,
Buried under my seat,
Buried underneath heat,
Buried under my friends,
Buried it?ll never end,
Verse 2
Walking through the halls,
Blood on the walls,
Passed my old friends,
Now I'm hanging out with Lenz
He pulled out he?s sticks,
I lost all my picks,
B brought his bass,
I whipped out my six,
I was doing swell,
Everything was well,
Until I started to fail,
I ate some chips,
And made my self some dip,
Then my mom said
Your grounded,
Cause I?m,
Buried under my seat,
Buried underneath heat,
Buried under my friends,
Buried it?ll never end,
x2
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Post by Breakdown on Aug 30, 2003 9:18:34 GMT -5
I Know
When will you finally realise,
You can tell if she likes you by the look in her eyes,
If she thinks that you?re hot or that you?re just a dick,
All this P.M.S bullshit is making me sick.
Do you even know why you like her anyway?
But I know how you feel coz I feel the same way.
And I know that she?s not worth all this heartache.
And I know late at night,
You?re always awake!
Why don?t you sit back relax for a while.
Until you realise that it?s all in her smile.
If she thinks that you?re hot or that you?re just a dick.
All this P.M.S bullshit is making me sick
Do you even know why you like her anyway?
But I know how you feel coz I feel the same way.
And I know that she?s not worth all this heartache.
And I know late at night,
You?re always awake!
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Post by Breakdown on Aug 30, 2003 9:20:23 GMT -5
Look Around
You stand up on the ground..
But there is no one
There to be found
And nothing here for you....
No one is there for you
To say how you feel
So you pray to god
And take a kneel
You feel you got no one to talk to
Everyone?s just thinking about themselves
No one can hear your suffering cry now
Everyone is just to selfish about themselves
You pray that you hadn?t
Said all that stuff
So that you make all your friends think
That you are real tough
And you hate your life
And you don?t want to try
So stop worry about it all
And open your eyes??.
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Post by Breakdown on Aug 30, 2003 9:25:13 GMT -5
Summit
Yes its all come to an end,
All the time that?s gone by
Look how we spent
All the nights in our lives,
As we tried to fix,
All this miserable crap
And now our lives have gone by,
So now it?s my time to die?
You feel so useless
Like a small stain,
Because you went for it all
And ended up with pain?
Its time to forgive
And forget what you?ve done
Cause now its time to
Stay or to run.
So you run and hide
And run from your death
Because its time to die
And take your last breath?.
But your mom and dad they
Don?t realize
What a precocious thing
They have in their lives
Until it?s all gone
And then they?ll state a fact
On your grave and say
It?s all coming back
And now that you?re gone
You really wish what you had done
Was take out the bullets
and not shot the gun
It was all-wrong
And now you can see that
You had a great life
And you can retrieve that
So now you sit and
You watch form above
You realize it was wrong
Even though you had no love
You think how much
You hated it all
You think your life was priceless
So you took the fall
And watch all your friends
Break down in tears
As you think there?s no worries
Or no fears??
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Sept 27, 2003 19:00:28 GMT -5
You dont have bad sogns.. I like them..
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Post by Breakdown on Sept 28, 2003 10:15:11 GMT -5
thanx, i know they arent even close to be as good as yours, but i try, that's all that countst  |
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Sept 28, 2003 19:48:30 GMT -5
Its best to try. This would be cool combine my songs and yours and we could have a small album!
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Post by Breakdown on Sept 29, 2003 19:56:19 GMT -5
Yeah, that would be pretty cool, but i also have others that i didnt post yet, cause they are pretty stupid, and they need alot of work, maybe you can fix them up for me...
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Sept 30, 2003 16:03:05 GMT -5
I can do that send them to my emaila nd when I check my emails I will print them up and assist you with them.
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Post by Breakdown on Oct 2, 2003 18:13:20 GMT -5
ok, ill send them as soon as possible, hahaha, they are really bad...
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Post by Robert on Oct 5, 2003 12:44:49 GMT -5
nicey! good job man, those are fairly good for someone like you j/k man.
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