Just something I wrote!

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

Pieces of me lost in you
Need to be myself to be true what to do
Make you happy, to believe it
Make you see what your missin, leavin

Dont you want to hate me, Dont fucking lie
For being better than you, Dont be shy
Dont you want to test me, quiz me baby
Before I forget about you, leave you hating

{ Face of my father, follow me
Wish so hard, I want to be
Falling down, upon my knees
Needing more than this mediocrity }

Fuck you and your patriotism
Time to live free of this optimism
Leave the hate inside you, surrounding you
Show you the meaning of being used, screwed

I hate the life you've given me
Nothing more than blinding mediocrity
Embarassed to be the lower class dont want to be, what the fuck
I hate this feel of being stuck , and for what
Be a worthless parasite looking for another fucking buck

{ Face of my father, follow me
Wish so hard, I want to be
Falling down, upon my knees
Needing more than this mediocrity }

I deserve better than this shit, no way no more
Im leavin you and this stress, for a better world
I have too much to look forward to, forget it
Dont call me anymore, wont answer it

Need to be alone in my own solitude
To become the master of my own mood
With no restraint and no hassle
Ill become what I want, all the better

{ Face of my father, follow me
Wish so hard, I want to be
Falling down, upon my knees
Needing more than this mediocrity }

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

So what do you think? Someone please answer me. I put this in here because barely anyone goes to the music section. I know this because no one ever read or commented on my last few songs or whatever these are. SO please dont spam and be as mean as you need to be, let it free. LOL

[Robert]

I really like it! haha.... thought up a name yet?

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

Not yet. I know it needs more work. When I get my acoustic guitar which I ordered hopefully I can learn it fast to make this better. I mainly posted this on here so people get what mood I am in. I want more people to come and check this out. My writing is getting better I think.

If anyone thinks of a name or some possibilites please put them in here.

Also what are your favorite parts and why?

[Robert]

Dont you want to hate me, Dont fucking lie
For being better than you, Dont be shy
Dont you want to test me, quiz me baby
Before I forget about you, leave you hating

that is my favorite part, because well thats the way I've been thinking lately in some sense.... and I feel that I can relate alot to that part.

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

Without a doubt that sums up alot with me. I also like the following alot:


{ Face of my father, follow me
Wish so hard, I want to be
Falling down, upon my knees
Needing more than the mediocrity }

This to me means I want more than what I have now. For that I want to move on and leave it all behind.

[.B.e.c.c.a.<3]

Wow i really liked that. ;D
My favorite part is this.
Pieces of me lost in you
Need to be myself to be true what to do
Make you happy, to believe it
Make you see what your missin, leavin

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

Thanks alot shadylady. I also liked that part and I think that this could make a good song once I get my guitar and start writing the tabs to it.

[Daemon Rose]

"I deserve better than this shit, no way no more
Im leavin you and this stress, for a better world
I have too much to look forward to, forget it
Dont call me anymore, (let it ring) wont answer it"

I added a part which made it sound a little better bro. I like this song. The chorus is off the chains man great job!