The path i choose

[Breakdown]

During the last rays of the sacred moon
I walk the desolate terrain cold and all alone
The rider came to me a black tornado, a violent mass
The cloud of evil rose, now I'm marked for all time

Temptation befell me
Darkness is calling for me
This is the path that I choose
This is the path that I choose

Forced power besieged in me
Showing visions of what will be
Now obsessed with my fate
I must go forth and conquer

The chosen one to lead the pack
This boiling hate has risen
From the depths of my blackened heart
This madness is my destiny

Temptation befell me
Darkness is calling for me
This is the path that I choose
This is the path that I choose

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

During the last rays of the sacred moon
I walk the desolate terrain cold and all alone (unmoved)
The rider came to me a black tornado, a violent mass
The cloud of evil rose, now I'm marked(,) for all time (for all I pass)

Temptation befell me
Darkness is calling for me
This is the path that I choose
This is the path that I choose

Forced power besieged in me
Showing visions of what will be
Now obsessed with my fate
I must go forth and conquer (it)

The chosen one to lead the pack
This boiling hate has risen (back)
From the depths of my blackened heart
This madness is my destiny (harp)

Temptation befell me
Darkness is calling for me
This is the path that I choose
This is the path that I choose



I dont know if this will make sense.

[Breakdown]

The chosen one to lead the pack
This boiling hate has risen (back)
From the depths of my blackened heart
This madness is my destiny (harp)

thats all i see wrong with urs

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

GranD said:

The chosen one to lead the pack
This boiling hate has risen (back)
From the depths of my blackened heart
This madness is my destiny (harp)

thats all i see wrong with urs

What do you think we can do to fix this then?

[Breakdown]

what is with harp?

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

I dont know. Its actually the only thing that came to mind.

[Breakdown]

eh dont bother... this song sucks anyways lol

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

I like this song though. With a little work it could be awesome.