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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Jul 28, 2004 2:56:06 GMT -5
I am sorry I am not good enough for someone who can't understand i am not perfect for you But I am willing to try
I want to be with you, forever But you want to be with me, never Our love once was strong And all but some has now gone
The pain inside wants to leave But it can't as I don't believe It needs someone to release it For as I can't see it
My hearts broken into a million pieces Not from me but from you and all your hate Maybe your scared of commitment But maybe its because you were always hit
I forgave you for the mistrust Please forgive me for the bust Abouve your heart that bleeds now and then Lets let something new begin
I don't know why I need you so Maybe its because I can't let go Things aren't going to be the same But I won't let you go in shame
In hopes to get something more From the woman I adore I will love you for you So please let me be the one your love will choose.
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Sept 20, 2004 23:38:59 GMT -5
Well I guess no one likes this one.
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Post by BlackWidow on Oct 18, 2004 1:30:29 GMT -5
Guess again!
I had tears reading this ..lol..dont laugh! *pokes out tongue*
Emotional and very strong.
Widow
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Oct 18, 2004 1:45:20 GMT -5
Well thank you Widow for your comments. If you like this one you will like Undying, Everlasting and a few other ones.
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Post by BlackWidow on Oct 18, 2004 1:48:40 GMT -5
Cool..I'll keep an eye out.I love raw lines and emotional pieces
Widow
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Post by Anton on Oct 18, 2004 1:53:35 GMT -5
Great poem Lance. ;D You don't mind me calling you that do you? I'm thinking about posting some of my poems. I haven't written anything in a while though.
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Oct 18, 2004 2:01:39 GMT -5
(DOnt worry about calling me Lance that is my name lol)
Anyways thanks guys for telling me what you think about the poem. I try my hardest and I encourage all to post their work.
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