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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Jul 26, 2004 3:00:18 GMT -5
Darkness Falls on the eyes of the awakened Erasing all the light behind the dreams Whispering violence and dispair Into the ears of the one who fears
Trembling and shaking from the darkness that has consumed The once mellow one becomes violent and indestructive Pouncing on the pure of heart Destroying their wall that blocked the dark It consumes them without hesitation Taking over another to continue on its quest
As they kill themselves to escape the darkness The darkness soldiers on to another To another To another To another and to another untils its quest is finished
The blood spills onto the floor as the last one left gives in Gives into her pain, suffering and selfishness She drops to the floor looking into the darkness upon her floor Gasping one more time as her life of her and her son dances befor eher eyes One last breathe and no more The darkness has consumed the final soul, now the quest is complete....
Suicide is not the answer Suicide is an easy way out of something that can be solved But many think of it as the only means to a problem Think twice before letting the darkness consume you Think about your family and friends before doing yourself in Remember all problems can be solved if your willing...
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Post by .B.e.c.c.a.<3 on Jul 26, 2004 4:45:01 GMT -5
Wow! I really really like that one. Great job! You are a really good writer!
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Jul 26, 2004 14:20:47 GMT -5
Thanks alot. I have alot of experience with the suicide so this poem relieved alot of that that was pent up inside of me.
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Post by Breakdown on Jul 26, 2004 15:47:23 GMT -5
Thanks alot. I have alot of experience with the suicide so this poem relieved alot of that that was pent up inside of me. \ no doubt man... i think about that shit all the time... idk y tho... but anyways... its a great poem... and it really expresses alot about the main topic... omg now i sound like my english teacher haha
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Jul 26, 2004 23:43:20 GMT -5
\ no doubt man... i think about that shit all the time... idk y tho... but anyways... its a great poem... and it really expresses alot about the main topic... omg now i sound like my english teacher haha Well it is good to sound like an english teacher sometimes. I think what you said works well for what you meant. Yes it does pertain alot to the main subject and I think it is one of my favorite poems because it is around the topic more than most I do.
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