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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Dec 6, 2003 22:19:38 GMT -5
Rules: Put up a poem you want to use. When we get 6 people we will begin the competition!
Poem Name: Undying, Everlasting Poet: Lance
My love for you is undying, everlasting My heart aches for your touch, lovingly My soul weeps as you leave me alone, unwanted I don’t like being the other For I want to be the only one Tears form and roll off my cheek, unscaved Thoughts run through my head relentlessly, emotionally Angela I know you don’t want us to be But I want us to become what we once were I don’t want to take the backseat When I want to be the driver
Racing through my head is my thoughts Falling off my cheek are my tears Aching for your touch is my heart Alone when you are away is my soul
Angela you bring the best out in me You make me feel so free Angela you bring the worst out in me You make me feel so confused Angela you are the reason I breathe For you touched me in ways no one else has touched me Angela you'll be the reason I cease to exist For if you don’t chose me I will simply not breathe
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Forever_Gone.
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"Me? I'm dishonest, and a dishonest man you can trust to be dishonest... Honestly....
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Post by Forever_Gone. on Dec 6, 2003 22:25:30 GMT -5
Too bad I'm not that good at poetry. Here are my entries though:
Poem Name:Inside my Mind
Inside my mind it all makes sense, Nobody to tell me otherwise. I want to make my own mistakes and hope nobody tells me not to. My life is good, I'm happy with it But why do others say differently? They do not understand my thoughts why I think what I think. So instead they mix it up and tell me to think otherwise. Why do they not see what I see? See what really makes sense...
Poem Name:Out on My Swing Set
Whenever I see My back-yard overcrowded with a variety of trees, It is a summer day out on my swing set. A breeze wisps past me As I get higher and higher.
But this is not my story. My story is going higher and higher to look for my dog Sandy. But she is not there. Heaven is higher then I can see.
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Creeper
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Post by Creeper on Dec 7, 2003 12:16:52 GMT -5
Title: Darkness Within
My mind hath been taken by loves madness. Can not this world of love as have been told just appear. Tthis shall the darkness within love become free it shall bind hearts and take away perpetual minds as mine was so this my well bing shall be foretold as the darkness within.
Title: Shadow of Loneliness
I am alone withering from the tears of hatred from love, love I once had. The people I wanted to love me in my universe see me as an invisible shadow of loneliness and depression, cant you see I am but a being of shadows never to be remembered but forgotten......
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Dec 8, 2003 13:05:50 GMT -5
River of Echoes
Flowing ontop a river of passion I look down into the crystal water Seeing my face reflect back at me A leaf from the tree above me falls Making the water echo Fading my face into the darkness below I begin to progress further down the river Stopping ever so often to look at the sky The clouds form the shapes of many beautiful animals My eyes begin to tear I begin to think about the love I have for you Just the thoughts of me and you in each others arms Makes me realize that true love only comes once And I found the true love that I had been looking for For this one river of passion I have found everything I have wanted So you Angela are that river And I am the tree who made that echo
One Last Chance
I am sorry I am not good enough for someone who can't understand i am not perfect for you But I am willing to try
I want to be with you, forever But you want to be with me, never Our love once was strong And all but some has now gone
The pain inside wants to leave But it can't as I don't believe It needs someone to release it For as I can't see it
My hearts broken into a million pieces Not from me but from you and all your hate Maybe your scared of commitment But maybe its because you were always hit
I forgave you for the mistrust Please forgive me for the bust Abouve your heart that bleeds now and then Lets let something new begin
I don't know why I need you so Maybe its because I can't let go Things aren't going to be the same But I won't let you go in shame
In hopes to get something more From the woman I adore I will love you for you So please let me be the one your love will choose.
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Post by LPFeh on Dec 8, 2003 21:18:07 GMT -5
It's A Short Poem II hear voices... I see air... I tell only the truth... These are my secrets... that no one knows... but you...
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