She Would Have

[BlackWidow]

There where indifference held you
Was a place she could have filled
That void between the light and dark
Where blood and tears were spilled

Through the crowd,you walked alone
In preference of solitude in life
Yet in your hands,she could have fit
Your silent friend,devoted wife

Where others feared to tread with heart
She would have followed high and low
And why she craved the man you were
Is something she'll never know

You bruised the soul,burned the mind
Of those who thought to knock you down
And when you kicked their breath to dust
She would have backed you without sound

No place was held for anyone
You took your leave and dealt the blows
Fight for right,care none the hurt
Care not,care less,indifference shows

Where others feared to tread with heart
She would have followed high and low
And why she craved the man you were
Is something she'll never know

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

Wow I must say this sounds like a poem that my ex would have written to me. Really she feel in love with me but I was different then than now. Anyways this poem is awesome another one of my favorites.

[BlackWidow]

Yes some women can see the good heart in a man that is sometimes shadowed by the way life kicks.It takes understanding and patience,total forgiveness too,to be able to see it play out .

The way you write of love,shows me that you are where you are supposed to be in your heart.I am happy for you..

Thanks again for your comments..all of them.I really appreciate you taking the time

Widow

[Mr. Hendrickson™]

thanks for the compliments again but this is about your poem and how great it is. Just remember a great poem is one which has true feelings behind. aA bad poem is one that is never written.