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Post by Forsaken on Sept 29, 2003 18:19:05 GMT -5
A hollow heart a shining knife who would care if I ended my life? the venom laughter the tears of pain the screams of fear as my blood drains red scars on the arm with the blood flowing down people judging as i walked around town I drowned in me sorrow my mind was liek a cell good riddence all my "friends" I'll see you in HELL
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Post by Dale The Great! on Oct 23, 2003 15:37:56 GMT -5
thats pretty good i like the rhyming ;D
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Post by Sheik on Oct 27, 2003 15:56:04 GMT -5
lol Thanks i was kinda Mad at alot of fucking peopl but yea im ok now....so we wont be seeing any of those anymore
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Oct 27, 2003 15:58:12 GMT -5
That is a pretty good poem.. Godo job.
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Post by Sheik on Oct 27, 2003 16:07:00 GMT -5
Good* and Thanks lol
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Post by Mr. Hendrickson™ on Oct 28, 2003 13:59:14 GMT -5
God I cant spell. Anyways it was cool.. very cool..
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Post by Sheik on Oct 28, 2003 14:53:54 GMT -5
Its Mostly Suicidal more then cool...but thanks
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Post by ChildOfEternalHate on Nov 14, 2003 3:50:46 GMT -5
It's pretty good, I like it!
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